The ask

Gyorgy Mora, Lead Data Scientist at Ekata-Mastercard needed to edit and improve a summary of his recent research on fraud detection algorithms for their Internal Newsletter.

Thought process

I read through the original article, outlining key points in the margins, and writing questions whenever something was not clear.

What I did

I met with Gyorgy for a beer in a small Czech bar in Budapest, to discuss the broader context of the article's audience, background of the work, and intended effect.
After getting clarity on several questions, I created a new outline, structuring the paper around the main points. I then reorganized content within each paragraph, and line-edited.