Technical / Science · Editor
Address Obfuscation
Recent research update on machine learning fraud detection algorithms for Ekata Internal Newsletter.
Task
Gyorgy Mora, Lead Data Scientist at Ekata-Mastercard needed to edit and improve a summary of his recent research on fraud detection algorithms for their Internal Newsletter.
Process
I read through the original article, outlined key points and questions. Next, beer. I met with Gyorgy at a small Czech bar in Budapest to discuss the broader context of the article's audience, background, and desired outcomes. I then created a new outline, restructured the paper around main points, reorganized paragraph content, and line-edited.
Results
"I do some complicated shit. Robert deconstructed my argument, helped me improve the logic, and made my work more understandable to managers and other stakeholders. He really got inside my thinking. He made the text concise and cohesive in style. The end result really impressed people."
Gyorgy Mora, Lead Data Scientist, System Architect - Ekata-Mastercard Superlinked